Wednesday, 10 October 2012
Script
EXT: medium long angel shot of a house.
INT: Terrence standing by the stairs putting his shoes on he says
‘By love’ and exists through the front door.
EXT: Terrence leaves the house to walk right, he comes to a bush- were he gets a bag
out of the bush and changes his clothing. ( from cardiagan to hoodie)
EXT: Terrence walks up towards the estate to a see a little boy walking towards him, he grabs him.
Terrence: ‘where is my scrilla ‘
Boy:’ I don’t, I don’t know I’ll, I’ll get it to you, jus give me a coupla days init’
Terrence: ‘ what fam, I want my money now mate, give it to me today’
EXT: Terrence’ s mobile phone rings
He answers : ‘Hello babes’
Wife: where are you ?
Terrence : ‘ honey I’m on my way’
INT: wife cleaning the house, she walks up to the bed to get terrence’s trousers off the floor, she goes into the pocket to find a ring.
EXT: Terrence rushing home – goes past the bush and then realises to go back- Running back to the bush he changes his clothing again.
EXT: Terrence knocks on the door
INT: Wife opens the door
‘ get in ere right now,
INT: Wife shows the ring,
‘ whats this eh ? , you buying rings for other woman’
Terrence ‘ Baby it’s for you, I swear it’s for you’
Wife: Don’t baby me’’, she bends down grabs a shoe and hits round the head, she then slaps him
INT: Terrence runs upstairs to find his wife chasing him up the stairs.
She follows him to the toilet.
INT: We hear the noises of two of them shouting and screaming in the toilet.
INT: Terrence comes out of the toilet without any bruise marks,angry with a belt.
INT: We go into the toilet to find the wife on the floor, beaten and bloody.
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ReplyDeletewww a start to the scripting process
ebi but doesn't look like a 5 minute film at present - average 1 side of A4 per minute of screen time as previously advices is the norm